Dear Father,
Dad i wish i can kill the guys that beat you. I really miss you and i hope that you were with me right now because I am so lonley. Where am I going to stay. It breaks my heart that you have gone to heaven because I have nobody to express my emotions with. The only one alive in the family alive is just me. Why dont I just kill myself because I have nobody. I'm trying to live but I just cant live like this. I want to be up in heaven with yhu. Your a big part of my life and I really need yoou right now.
Always capitalize "I"--you should know this as an eighth grader!
ReplyDeleteBesides that,your eulogy definitely focuses on the emotional aspect of Elie's situation. I would challenge you to think about how Elie would reflect on his relationship with his dad, specifically how it changed over the course of the memoir.
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